Solutions
The underlined part of the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
• Underlined part needs correction in adverb.
• “More” as an adverb is used to form comparative of most adjectives and adverb with two or more syllables.
For example:
As a photographer, shape and form were more important to him than color.
• “Most” as an adverb is used as a superlative form of adjectives to show the greatest degree of those adjectives.
For example:
Patience is one of the most important attributes in a teacher.
• In the given sentence we have to attach the greatest degree with adjective “important”. This can be done with the use of superlative form i.e. “most”. But in the underlined part, we have erroneously used an adverb “more” to form comparative degree of adjective “important”. Thus, adverb “most” should be in place of adverb “more”.
• Hence, “the most important” is the correct substitution.
Thus, the correct sentence will be:
I've realised that working hard is the most important thing for me
Hence, option D is the correct answer.